Pretty Crazy

Action/adventure fiction. There are three chapters. Read one if you want, I just need opinions. :)

Could you do this for me? There are three chapters, but you can just review one if you want. :)

No I did not expect this. I thought it would be more pictures of flowers. But it's art. So yay! Personally I like the colored one better. All the different ...

This is very beautiful. The words you used set the scene wonderfully. I could easily picture the images as I read. The ending was sudden, but I liked it. It ...

Hi, It's me, here to review your story. Well, there aren't any nitpicks for me to do. So I'll just say that this is well-written. Everything that happens you describe ...

School Area 26. Not the most creative name for a school, but at the end of the day, who cares? It isn’t a public school, more of a place for ...

Ugh, I don't like vampires. Yet I'm fascinated by this. Your writing is like a trap. I can't stop reading it (that's a compliment by the way). Maybe it's because ...

Hello, I spotted a few spelling errors and typos: I heard a knock at my door and I opened it even though it was aftr curfew. Forgot the "E" in ...

Hello, I don't get why you don't have more reviews. This story is quite interesting :) Nitpick time! Michael Turner, father of teenager Maxine Turner, has been found, dead, in ...

I'm speechless. That was amazing. Just amazing. It was beautifully written and flowed nicely. The meaning of the story is clear. Since it was from a child's point of view, ...

Hello, Just a couple nitpicks right quick and then the rest of the review. Bette looked at me and I shot her a week grin. I think you meant "weak". ...

Hello danceforevergirl, First of all, I love your user name! I'm going to review, my thoughts in blue . :) Prologue: I tried to stop her but it was too ...

Hello, I think pretty much everyone can relate to this. But then, not everybody writes it down. You did, and in poetry form too. The structure of it, I'd have ...

Hey there, This is really cool, you did a good job on it. It looks just like a mockingjay! If there were one thing I could say about it, it ...

Hello, I shall review this for you. :) Okay, so this starts of really fast. The sentences seem smudged together. It was very boring, cows, trees, grass, and a mountain ...